The Amber Sword – Chapter 2

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13 thoughts on “The Amber Sword – Chapter 2

  1. “This was a girl that Romain had always adored. She and her aunt lived in the opposite house, and she usually had some quaint aspirations, for an example, she wanted to go out to the outside world to become a travelling merchant.”

    a girl that Brendel had always adored?

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  2. The Amber Sword is the best of the genre of ‘reincarnated in the game’ that I have seen. That does not mean that it is the best out there, but it is the best that I have seen.

    You might want to play ‘One Of These Things is Not Like The Others ‘ to see what is differenet between the two versions.
    — === === —
    Sophie could not help but prayed heavily in his heart to
    the the ultimate goddess.

    should be:

    Sophie could not help but pray heavily in his heart to
    the ultimate goddess.
    <<>>
    https://wolfietranslation.wordpress.com/2015/10/19/the-amber-sword-ch-3/
    — === === —
    After pondering for a few moments, before he was about to set
    down the curtains down to settle his emotions down and think
    of a way to escape, they started talking.

    should be:

    Brendel stood there, pondering what to do next, trying to settle his
    emotions. Before he could lower the curtains and think of a way to
    escape, he heard two voices outside talking.
    — === === —
    “Where is that pitiful worm’s body, bring him out and let me take
    a look. Didn’t the report only stated there were were two women here?”

    should be:

    “Where is that pitiful worm’s body, bring him out and let me take a
    look. Didn’t the intelligence report state that there were only two women
    in this area?”
    — === === —
    Although it was a gaping hole in this whole building that was
    left behind by his grandfather, Sophie did not think twice about
    it and immediately promptly turned around and ran.

    should be:

    Although there was now a gaping hole in his grandfather’s home,
    Sophie did not think twice about the damage. He immediately
    turned around and ran.
    — === === —
    He immediately turned back to point to the house: “Soldiers, catch
    that two bastards!”

    should be:

    He immediately turned around and pointed at the house: “Soldiers, catch
    those two bastards!”

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  3. Same with me mc name is really something just gonna skip the name maybe before he born his father or mother will name their baby sophie no matter boy or girl or maybe that is mc sister that die before mc born so their parents give him that name to always remmember here

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  4. Lol, I’ve never seen a protagonist with a stat less than 1 before (0.9?)😂
    And this chapter’s title remind me of a certain novel….

    Thanks 4 the chapter!

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  5. I tried… I just can’t with that name. In my language Sophie is a very used name that is just too girly.
    Too bad this looked good don’t translate the name when it doesn’t make sense… Wth…

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